chenpod 2011-5-30 23:43
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ywrfz095 2011-5-31 02:04
绿帽文中,良人算是精品,对被带了帽子的丈夫的心理把握很到位。
森森2004 2011-5-31 08:04
楼主发文辛苦,首先红心送上,看来我待从文章的开始看起了,妻子的出轨,丈夫的背叛,在这个现实充斥着金钱和肉欲的社会比比皆是,文章扣提很前卫,不过真诚希望楼主在百忙之中调整思路,把主人翁内心复杂的心态有所体现和描写,把人心的扭曲和挣扎在性爱的描写中淋漓尽致的体现出来,让我们广大狼友身临其境的去幻想一下那堕落的快感吧!
new_oersted 2011-5-31 09:12
看完第一集,以为铺垫即将结束,肉戏即将开始,等者雪涵为为让丈夫的阳具重新挺起来,开始在丈夫面前与小关调情,让小关的大阳具在自己的小口中出入;把老外上司请进家里,让老外上司教跳舞,上司不安分的手解开了乳罩,并且不停地在自己的臀部游离,把一个隆起的前部贴在自己的腹部,感受到一只小钢炮,丈夫急着把卧室的门打开,让老外抱着雪涵在自己的婚床上做爱,雪涵在老外的胯下不断呻吟;雪涵累了,丈夫带她去按摩,男技师的双手像魔手一样,把雪涵的乳头挑拨得坚硬无比,从阴道不断流出淫水,主动要求男技师实施阴道按摩,当然用的是男技师的男根...一曲曲淫荡的场面,让丈夫的阳具变硬变持久,一个性福美满的家庭形成了。现在的第二集,有点纠结,思路有待进一步清晰,期待作者把该文写成一个经典。
liuliu886 2011-5-31 09:45
见到更新了,结果原来是这样,期待香艳艳的3P
tomawp 2011-5-31 20:57
第一部看完了,写的很不错,第二部总觉得还没进入状态,坐等作者更新。
vvbbnn 2011-5-31 21:56
男主角性能力不行 被动的被女人玩了,他老婆那种欲望还是很能满足其他的男人的。。。换妻的情节还是有的。。期待呀。
深度深入 2011-6-1 00:09
好不容易看见楼主的新作,可惜就是还没有3p的戏。希望不要让我们等久了!
139461 2011-6-1 01:01
说实话我还没有看到这,一直在收藏。开头几章看过了,很吸引人。当男人不容易啊,尤其碰到性欲强的老婆!
hiweiwei 2011-6-1 15:08
写的的确很细腻,而且还有不同人物的心理活动,但对于许多喜欢看肉戏的,还是太含蓄了一点。如果再放开一点就完美了,毕竟是在SIS呀。
faithpower99 2011-6-2 01:25
楼主采用了双面角度的叙述风格,从夫妻二人的心里层面叙述,给读者一个全方位的感官刺激,很是给力!
w77m88 2011-6-2 18:26
老大是不是没时间写,想快点结束,所以一下子转了那么大的弯,居然要分道扬镳了。
xhpwlsl01 2011-6-2 18:37
细腻的描写,也比较符合现实,毕竟3P什么的以现实来说太过扯淡,比较赞同7楼的意见,各找各爱吧,如果说老婆都能让别人分享,那么也太窝囊了
随风星痕 2011-6-2 23:54
非常好的小说 第二部剧情又有些改变了 期待楼主更新
saotanghu 2011-6-4 23:55
男主角有点看不懂,他应该是喜欢自己的妻子的,为什么还要出轨?难道就是为了报复?
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83332375 2011-7-4 13:19
原来是这个结果,终于盼到更新了。写作还是要一鼓作气阿
茎精夜液 2011-8-19 18:17
每个人都有最不想让别人去触碰的心里伤疤,一旦被触碰,作出的反应将是异常强烈的。郭强最不愿听到的就是别人说他不行,而雪涵最不愿人提起的就是过去和小关的那段经历。这个道理反过来讲也是成立的。那就是郭强最希望找回的是作为男人的尊严,而雪涵最希望获得的是丈夫的谅解和宽容。可偏偏郭强和雪涵这对夫妻彼此都揭开了对方的伤疤,于是一场战争就不可避免了。只是可怜了清雅。当看到清雅说出“郭强,你是不是拿我当发泄的工具了”这句话时,内心很是为她抱不平。就是泄欲工具!一个痴情女子,在这场夫妻游戏中充当了他人的玩偶!
uy2002 2011-8-19 19:51
看来要补补课了,这样的文章也是不可多得的啊。不知道3p中还会有谁呢.哎,这样的事情怎么说也算是悲剧吧。
a245757030 2011-8-20 00:29
清雅是个好女孩,这样对她真的不公平,我见犹怜!